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Submitted: February 17, 2007
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed: 1/320 second
F Number: F/14.0
Focal Length: 18 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Date Picture Taken: Dec 30, 2006, 5:44:46 PM

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Just here
You were
Just here
We leave to say goodbye
I return to find the hole
Your absence created
To be eaten by the house
Everything moved on
Except me
I'm still behind
I see non-existant holes
Where you sat,
- laid,
- held my hand,
- told me you loved me,
- stood.
Nothing feels the same.
Everything is the same.


By ~wearemofia










Martinborough, New Zealand

*This piece is the most I've ever had to go through to take a shot -- We were on our road trip and saw this abandoned house on a hill and decided we'd brave the freezing rain and howling wind and walk a couple hundred metres to get there... a broken umbrella and set of soaked clothes later I got to take this very satisfying shot :)

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In short what I think of this photograph :sprint:

Exposure : Good and creative
Colors : Dull and suits well
Focus : Good
Composition : Nice
Subject interest : The abandoned tragedy of this place is well captured. Reminds me of the lonely house in the "Texas chainsaw massacre" :XD:
Things to improve : Good as it is.

This comment is solely on my viewpoint of this photo so if you wish to correct me kindly do so. Kindly note that I’m not trying to judge your work in any manner.
:bow:

Even some points I mentioned above can be negative I decide to comment since it’s an interesting piece at the first place. I hope I helped u in some way. :handshake:
Thanks very much for your input... appreciate it :)

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"Imagination is intelligence with an erection."
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Very nice...Has a forlorne look about it

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You antipodean fleck of BUMFLUFF- Dr. Greg House M.D.
Wow! What a house. Looks like it must be haunted.

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A sigh escapes from heaven, and worlds end.
This house is so cool, man. I wonder what kind of people used to live there. The colors are great too, very nice work. =)

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Wow! This is just amazing. :O
Thanks so much sweetness :D

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"Imagination is intelligence with an erection."
--Victor Hugo
The house is wicked... it looked and felt like it was haunted!

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"Imagination is intelligence with an erection."
--Victor Hugo
It felt like it must be haunted too! It was so creepy... felt like I was in the Blair Witch Project =P

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"Imagination is intelligence with an erection."
--Victor Hugo
Thank u :)

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"Imagination is intelligence with an erection."
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